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Topic	I just finished writing a pilot script and I would love to get some feedback.
Norman_Smiley 12/24/21 3:14:38 AM #5:	Started reading it. First thing. It took 1 scene to establish the kids were friends growing up and into music. I'm now 5 pages and 5 timelines in. I got bored on the 2nd one. Think about any great best buds for life tv show. Does it start with showing their entire childhood or does it start with 1 quick scene and then have all those other cut scenes sprinkled throughout seasons? --- http://i.imgur.com/BVBQC.jpg The big wiggle equals ratings. <cite>Norman_Smiley posted [p:961173753] in I just fin... [t:79823986]...</cite> <quote>Started reading it. First thing. It took 1 scene to establish the kids were friends growing up and into music. I'm now 5 pages and 5 timelines in. I got bored on the 2nd one. Think about any great best buds for life tv show. Does it start with showing their entire childhood or does it start with 1 quick scene and then have all those other cut scenes sprinkled throughout seasons? --- http://i.imgur.com/BVBQC.jpg The big wiggle equals ratings.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
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