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trodi_911 11/10/21 11:50:37 AM #12:	Revelation34 posted... Tart ocean spray beer, church, mountain going haikus make no sense Five syllables first Then seven for the next line And five to end it Your haiku is poor From limitation it comes True innovation Also remember The land of the rising sun From where haiku come These words have meanings Which can be shorter than ours Moon runes are crazy --- "Killing is wrong... and bad. There should be a new stronger word for killing like 'badwrong' or 'badong'." Life is uncertain. Eat dessert first. <cite>trodi_911 posted [p:959867936] in Haiku... [t:79752183]...</cite> <quote>Revelation34 posted... </cite> <quote>Tart ocean spray beer, church, mountain going haikus make no sense</quote>Five syllables first Then seven for the next line And five to end it Your haiku is poor From limitation it comes True innovation Also remember The land of the rising sun From where haiku come These words have meanings Which can be shorter than ours Moon runes are crazy --- "Killing is wrong... and bad. There should be a new stronger word for killing like 'badwrong' or 'badong'." Life is uncertain. Eat dessert first.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
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