LogFAQs > #922176928

Keep people in character for one. That's how you get objectively decent (at worst) writing. They didn't, thus it sucked.

Examples:

If Jon kills Dany, give him an actual reason. Like her threatening Sansa and Winterfell. Or her trying to execute Arya (who tried to kill her).

And then if that happens, Drogon either kills him or Grey Worm does (Tyrion clearly dies as well). And due to their Khal dying, the Dothraki raid Westeros in vengeance. And the Unsullied back them up because they serve the same queen.

Things like that.

Or just...have Arya actually use her assassin abilities to kill Dany.

Also no Bran as king. Either Sansa as Queen, proving she 'played the game', Jon because he's the rightful heir and might be able to control the dragon, or keep Dany.

Alternative is to have Dany mimic her father, talking about burning all her enemies (or maybe doing so at Winterfell) and Jon does a Jamie and everything is full circle.

And the worst one would be for Jon to rule by Dany's side, but it still works.

If Bran's going to be king, we need a montage of him manipulating events for the pieces to fall in place, so at least it's an evil mastermind ending.

Basically anything but the apathetic garbage we got that didn't make sense.
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