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| Topic | Lmao did Goggalor close his pretentious writing topic after his own was posted |
| SGT_Conti 05/14/18 7:14:13 PM #214: | _Goggalor_ posted... Why are adjectives bad? Seriously, there's more than one way to say something. Language shouldn't be repetitive. There's nothing inherently wrong with adjectives but they should serve a purpose. Like, "rippling arm" is implicit by the description of the person as a barabrian; you're not going to have some scrawny dude in battle, so it's an unnecessary description. The swords should also be understood to be steel or at least some form of metal so using steel twice in the same sentence is not only repetitive, it's redundant. It's a matter of not needing to overexplain things and not treating the reader like an idiot. --- Posted with GameRaven 3.4 ... Copied to Clipboard! |
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