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TopicLmao did Goggalor close his pretentious writing topic after his own was posted
Zero_Destroyer
05/14/18 4:18:11 PM
#143:


marthsheretoo posted...
A pity the topic purged, but you absolutely did. Somebody posted it as an example of prosaic work that absolutely fucking sucks and you defended it.

Here's a sample paragraph to jog your memory.
A sweeping blade of flashing steel riveted from the massive barbarians hide enameled shield as his rippling right arm thrust forth, sending a steel shod blade to the hilt into the soldiers vital organs. The disemboweled mercenary crumpled from his saddle and sank to the clouded sward, sprinkling the parched dust with crimson droplets of escaping life fluid.


christ it's so overwritten

fuck i lack confidence in what I've written but holy shit wtf
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