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TopicLmao did Goggalor close his pretentious writing topic after his own was posted
_Goggalor_
05/14/18 3:59:56 PM
#93:


Mr_Biscuit posted...
Dude literally has a typo in the first sentence of his "best-written" book.

Somewhere on the river Acheron, I sold a part of my soul. It was fairpennny for a two, that is to say nice weather for a Tuesday, and I imparted upon the old man that lived near the isle a most curious visage, it stands to reason, for I was bloodied and bandaged so. My wounds were superficial but I must say, I really was very sad to see the blood there at all. What a fine thing, to live and die in dizzying excess. I Should be glad to say I did not suffer, though I may damn myself again through the lie. I was feeling a certain kind of way for a certain period of time and in no uncertain terms would I allow it to continue. I took the knife, I scratched the itch. Nothing of it besides the janitorial duties I bestowed on the clearly left me with any shame or regret, though the deed one I knew I would be ferried through Acheron. Elysium is for the meek and the mild, my brothers and sisters, and in no way did my curiosities lean towards either persuasion.

Somewhat devilishly I dabbled in intoxication, given to perversion of the mind and a fair ways past the point of caring to do anything about it. You see, the easiest way must be the best. That is surely it." Easy does it". "Take it easy". Everyone has the best of intentions when they set out, I assure you brothers and sisters, and the road is not always smooth. Does that mean one should continue on this road invariably, enduring every hole and divot as he is jostled about? What of the man who thinks to himself "The road being far too bumpy and unkind to my person, and myself being so very sore all the time, I shall depart from this carriage at once"? Is he to be condemned forever for hastening his departure? It seems so, given where I am now and where I have been. I admit I have been foolish. But when my story is told and all is said and done, let it be said not that I did not give both worlds a chance.


So? Mistakes are made. Still much better writing than Martin or Sanderson. One extra N doesn't invalidate the general prose.
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