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TopicXsquader created this new track and utilized 63 bpm and 126.
Schadenfreude
12/25/17 12:50:55 PM
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itachi15243 posted...
Schadenfreude posted...
itachi15243 posted...
I'm not a big fan of it. It sounds like you're trying to do trap, but you need more base, and a few good drops. Maybe some vocals, or some sort of other sound on top to bring it together. Here's and example of something similar to give you an idea

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n-TmZYLsdoQ


"It sounds like you're trying to do trap"

This is only offensive because I was making music with that sound way before trap ever existed lol. I appreciate the critique though. Will check out that song in a few.


A lot of people were, that's usually how a genre/sub genre is created dude. >.>

But yeah, I'd say get some bass and good drops in. The build up isn't too bad but without a nice drop or two, it kinda gets boring.

Also, maybe some vocals, or other overarching sound to bring it together. The vocals don't have to be singing either, you can always just mix some lines from something like a movie, anime, etc. I think something with a sorta battle or attack theme vocal mix would work nice.

If you did that, then it would definitely pull it together and make it something I could dance to. Right now it feels kinda incomplete and starts to get kinda stagnant.


Xsquader just got his laptop back from police the other day so he is still getting used to using the studio on this one again but when he does he expects things to not sound so incomplete anymore. I appreciate the critique and I originally wanted to add vocals but I just don't have the equipment to do what I want right now. Perhaps I will take all of this in mind and turn it into something else in the future.
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