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Topic | ok so why did you not like The Last Jedi SPOILERS |
The Admiral 12/17/17 9:42:25 PM #56: | s0nicfan posted... Ammonitida posted...s0nicfan posted...Ammonitida posted...It turns out, the admiral had the perfect plan and Poe didn't learn from him mistake, and cost more lives to be lost. A trope subverted. Agreed. But if she had done that, many of the plotlines in the movie wouldn't have occurred. This should be a lesson in screen writing 101. If the only way you can advance the plot is to have characters act intentionally stupid or withhold information from each other for no defensible reason, your writing is shitty. Go back to drawing board and find more creative and organic ways to advance the narrative. --- - The Admiral ... Copied to Clipboard! |
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