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MacArrowny posted...

Wait, what's wrong with the ending? I thought it was great.

I don't want to get too deep into it because I don't want the topic to turn into a redacted document with everyone discussing through spoiler tags, but the main thing is that it just felt very rushed to me. Everything that happens with Glenn's development after the reveal that he's not Timothy is sort of hurried through, and when the ending involves some pretty complex character motivations I think that's kind of a problem.

The story is quite good overall, but I think it has a major problem with pacing that all comes to a head with the ending just not feeling like it was built up properly. It could've very much used a few more hours to just slow things down and examine the effects some of the bigger plot points were having on the party.

I have one or two thematic nitpicks as well but overall I think it's a fine ending in theory. I just don't feel that it was executed well.