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Topic	The Legend of Heroes: Trails from Zero Review Zone
NFUN 09/23/22 1:13:57 PM #73:	MacArrowny posted... Making dialogue longer isn't necessarily a good thing. Regular English fiction has plenty of short exclamations in between more meaningful lines. every line should have a purpose. if you can replace one character with pretty much any other and have them say the same thing, the line isn't serving a purpose. the stock phrase they had was filler; the replacement should at least have personality. I don't think NISA should have changed the original translation at all but it's better than wasted text. besides, we're talking about a specific instance that did deserve more than a short exclamation --- Kneel... or you will be knelt <cite>NFUN posted [p:968241821] in The Legend... [t:80172193]...</cite> <quote>MacArrowny posted... </cite><quote>Making dialogue longer isn't necessarily a good thing. Regular English fiction has plenty of short exclamations in between more meaningful lines.</quote>every line should have a purpose. if you can replace one character with pretty much any other and have them say the same thing, the line isn't serving a purpose. the stock phrase they had was filler; the replacement should at least have personality. I don't think NISA should have changed the original translation at all but it's better than wasted text. besides, we're talking about a specific instance that did deserve more than a short exclamation --- Kneel... or you will be knelt</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
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