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Topic	Rate this short story I wrote about a dog.
thisworld 07/08/22 2:08:33 AM #9:	If this is your first story, 8/10. If you're a writer, ~~average and very predictable 5/10~~. Most dog stories basically only have two options for the dog. 100% happy or 100% sad ending. No sliding scale, just one extreme or another. Like MCU, it feels "I've seen this before" at times. If it were me, I'd probably pit Peanut against Megan's cat while keeping Brad and Megan as a couple who love BOTH pets. One beloved pet against another beloved pet so the reader won't know which one to root for :D <cite>thisworld posted [p:966422140] in Rate this ... [t:80086674]...</cite> <quote>If this is your first story, 8/10. If you're a writer, average and very predictable 5/10. Most dog stories basically only have two options for the dog. 100% happy or 100% sad ending. No sliding scale, just one extreme or another. Like MCU, it feels "I've seen this before" at times. If it were me, I'd probably pit Peanut against Megan's cat while keeping Brad and Megan as a couple who love BOTH pets. One beloved pet against another beloved pet so the reader won't know which one to root for :D</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
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