Yeah, the narrator is supposed to hate hot days, wishing there were clouds. AUGH!
Ahh, tense problems. Gotta get better >_>
At first I wanted the story to be much longer, with a cop going on patrol when he witnessed the murderer killing the kid. After a grueling interrogation, the murderer confessed that they had to kill the kid because of a vision. It's never made clear if it's the truth or not, but shortly after the murderer was found guilty and sent to prison, something happened. The cop watches the news next morning after the incident and found out that a massive prison break was planned that day for a mob boss, but apparently the mob boss was killed, along with other dangerous criminals, while others were left untouched, and the child killer went missing...
But then I had to do interviews, so I scrapped most of the plot and just went with a short ambiguous POV piece. That sucked.
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Aww, I lost to SuperNiceDog, Winner of the Rivalry Rumble Guru Contest