This might sound like a crazy small detail considering everything else, but I like how you managed to add the lip stick/gloss. I can never, ever make it look decent when trying it myself, the color is just off, or it ends up being too much. I think its sort of an underrated thing in terms of difficulty. So pulling it off well actually impresses me whenever I see it.

Utena kiwi chan sugoi

I think your version is cuter than the one in the show! <3