Poll of the Day > I made a haiku and would like some feedback.

Topic List
Page List: 1
ZenMaster420
01/26/21 10:12:36 PM
#1:


My third eye opens.
Enlightenment I will seek.
I am one with all.

Just starting to get into these because I find they are really good at balancing your chi and leads to a positive mental mind state and well being within.
... Copied to Clipboard!
GunslingerGunsl
01/26/21 10:14:08 PM
#2:


I read your haiku
It sounds very good to me
But mine is better
... Copied to Clipboard!
GunslingerGunsl
01/26/21 10:14:51 PM
#3:


Also, hi Sunny
... Copied to Clipboard!
SunWuKung420
01/26/21 10:16:12 PM
#4:


Not me.

Probably one of the users I've blocked, thirsty for my attention.

---
... Copied to Clipboard!
ZenMaster420
01/26/21 10:16:39 PM
#5:


GunslingerGunsl posted...
Also, hi Sunny
I think you might have me confused for some other individual. I just started visiting this site a couple of days ago. Peace be with you.
... Copied to Clipboard!
Soup_or_Science
01/26/21 10:16:47 PM
#6:


seems like ur pretty hi

...coo'

---
Official President of the World of the United States of America of PotD
(on golf break)
... Copied to Clipboard!
GunslingerGunsl
01/26/21 10:19:57 PM
#7:


SunWuKung420 posted...
Not me.

Probably one of the users I've blocked, thirsty for my attention.
o i c
... Copied to Clipboard!
ZenMaster420
01/26/21 10:22:47 PM
#8:


I mean no offense friends. I believe you have me confused with someone else. I bring nothing but positive vibes and crunchy chords.
... Copied to Clipboard!
mooreandrew58
01/26/21 11:06:52 PM
#9:


Well im not big into haikus but most ive read made little sense to me so I suppose this one is good cause I understand what's being said.

---
Cid- "looks like that overgrown lobster just got served!" Bartz-"with cheese biscuts AND mashed potatoes!"
... Copied to Clipboard!
zebatov
01/26/21 11:08:01 PM
#10:


I wrote a haiku
It was about Trudeaus dick
He does not have one

---
C was right.
... Copied to Clipboard!
ZenMaster420
01/27/21 8:09:25 AM
#11:


Thank you for the feedback everyone. I came up with this little diddy this morning to hopefully help kickstart everyone to having a positive and productive day!

A new day rises.
Beautiful is existence.
Energy flows through.
... Copied to Clipboard!
Topic List
Page List: 1