Poll of the Day > Any critiques of this steam store page?

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AwesomeTurtwig 05/23/20 11:52:48 PM #1:	It's not public yet. --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ <cite>AwesomeTurtwig posted [p:939621543] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote> It's not public yet. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Sahuagin 05/24/20 12:05:55 AM #2:	the image is unreadable are any of the preview media videos or just images? acheivments? --- *The truth basks in scrutiny.* https://imgur.com/GMouTGs http://projecteuler.net/profile/Sahuagin.png <cite>Sahuagin posted [p:939622046] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>the image is unreadable are any of the preview media videos or just images? acheivments? </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
AwesomeTurtwig 05/24/20 12:10:18 AM #3:	Sahuagin posted... the image is unreadable are any of the preview media videos or just images? acheivments? Oh darn. Try this one. https://i.imgur.com/CaKWqOV.png --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ <cite>AwesomeTurtwig posted [p:939622205] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>Sahuagin posted... </cite> <quote>the image is unreadable are any of the preview media videos or just images? acheivments?</quote>Oh darn. Try this one. https://i.imgur.com/CaKWqOV.png </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
agesboy 05/24/20 12:18:29 AM #4:	https://i.gyazo.com/61eaa814fb479d6fd586b68b2720d743.png double owned --- https://imgur.com/LabbRyN raytan and Kana are on opposite ends of the Awesome Spectrum. <cite>agesboy posted [p:939622486] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>https://i.gyazo.com/61eaa814fb479d6fd586b68b2720d743.png double owned </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
AwesomeTurtwig 05/24/20 12:40:01 AM #5:	agesboy posted... https://i.gyazo.com/61eaa814fb479d6fd586b68b2720d743.png double owned The imgur link doesn't work? --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ <cite>AwesomeTurtwig posted [p:939623165] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>agesboy posted... </cite> <quote>https://i.gyazo.com/61eaa814fb479d6fd586b68b2720d743.png double owned</quote>The imgur link doesn't work? </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
ReggieTheReckless 05/24/20 12:42:43 AM #6:	no critiques of the page, but get achievements out ASAP. It seems silly, but a lot of people can see them as a selling point <cite>ReggieTheReckless posted [p:939623271] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>no critiques of the page, but get achievements out ASAP. It seems silly, but a lot of people can see them as a selling point </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Sahuagin 05/24/20 12:46:33 AM #7:	There are minor issues with the writing, but I feel like I'm being super nitpicky by pointing them out. (and I'm not necessarily right) "Biologger was developed with speedrunning in mind, how fast can you beat the game?" is a run-on sentence. "Over 5" sounds weird since it's a small number "Speedrunner friendly, plan your route and try to get the best time!" is a run-on sentence (or something else) If the fifth bullet point has an exclamation mark, then the other ones should end in periods (maybe... not 100% sure) (sounds like if each line is a sentence they should get periods; but since this is marketing material appearance might matter more than punctuation) "...here's a sneak peak of some of the features that will be available upon release!" should maybe end in a colon. --- *The truth basks in scrutiny.* https://imgur.com/GMouTGs http://projecteuler.net/profile/Sahuagin.png <cite>Sahuagin posted [p:939623396] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>There are minor issues with the writing, but I feel like I'm being super nitpicky by pointing them out. (and I'm not necessarily right) "Biologger was developed with speedrunning in mind, how fast can you beat the game?" is a run-on sentence. "Over 5" sounds weird since it's a small number "Speedrunner friendly, plan your route and try to get the best time!" is a run-on sentence (or something else) If the fifth bullet point has an exclamation mark, then the other ones should end in periods (maybe... not 100% sure) (sounds like if each line is a sentence they should get periods; but since this is marketing material appearance might matter more than punctuation) "...here's a sneak peak of some of the features that will be available upon release!" should maybe end in a colon. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Krazy_Kirby 05/24/20 12:52:56 AM #8:	@DPsx7 --- Kill From The Shadows. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Idiot <cite>Krazy_Kirby posted [p:939623618] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>@DPsx7</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
AwesomeTurtwig 05/24/20 3:37:31 AM #9:	ReggieTheReckless posted... no critiques of the page, but get achievements out ASAP. It seems silly, but a lot of people can see them as a selling point Perhaps, but keep in mind this is the page for the demo. Full game isn't out for a while. --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ <cite>AwesomeTurtwig posted [p:939627780] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>ReggieTheReckless posted... </cite> <quote>no critiques of the page, but get achievements out ASAP. It seems silly, but a lot of people can see them as a selling point</quote>Perhaps, but keep in mind this is the page for the demo. Full game isn't out for a while. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
YoukaiSlayer 05/24/20 3:40:46 AM #10:	A little unsure why theres 2 versions of the soundtrack available in the "content for this game" section. Looks like the only difference is a hyphen. Other than that the page looks fine to me. Since the unique mechanics are a selling point, it might be nice to have a video showing off some of the cooler things you can do with it. It's hard to know if the challenge is more about speed or precision without any footage or anything but thats a small thing especially since this is a demo. --- I'm ninja (you can't see me) <cite>YoukaiSlayer posted [p:939627838] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>A little unsure why theres 2 versions of the soundtrack available in the "content for this game" section. Looks like the only difference is a hyphen. Other than that the page looks fine to me. Since the unique mechanics are a selling point, it might be nice to have a video showing off some of the cooler things you can do with it. It's hard to know if the challenge is more about speed or precision without any footage or anything but thats a small thing especially since this is a demo. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
AwesomeTurtwig 05/24/20 3:43:15 AM #11:	YoukaiSlayer posted... A little unsure why theres 2 versions of the soundtrack available in the "content for this game" section. Looks like the only difference is a hyphen. Other than that the page looks fine to me. Since the unique mechanics are a selling point, it might be nice to have a video showing off some of the cooler things you can do with it. It's hard to know if the challenge is more about speed or precision without any footage or anything but thats a small thing especially since this is a demo. Yeah I'm in the process of putting a trailer together. The soundtrack thing I am aware of. Since neither are released, for someone who doesn't own them, they won't see either. --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ <cite>AwesomeTurtwig posted [p:939627879] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>YoukaiSlayer posted... </cite> <quote>A little unsure why theres 2 versions of the soundtrack available in the "content for this game" section. Looks like the only difference is a hyphen. Other than that the page looks fine to me. Since the unique mechanics are a selling point, it might be nice to have a video showing off some of the cooler things you can do with it. It's hard to know if the challenge is more about speed or precision without any footage or anything but thats a small thing especially since this is a demo.</quote>Yeah I'm in the process of putting a trailer together. The soundtrack thing I am aware of. Since neither are released, for someone who doesn't own them, they won't see either. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
AwesomeTurtwig 05/25/20 9:13:35 PM #12:	Just got 10 new keys for the demo. Anyone interested? --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ <cite>AwesomeTurtwig posted [p:939706089] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>Just got 10 new keys for the demo. Anyone interested? </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
ReggieTheReckless 05/25/20 9:15:33 PM #13:	I probably wouldn't play it, but thank you for offering :) <cite>ReggieTheReckless posted [p:939706163] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>I probably wouldn't play it, but thank you for offering :) </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
LinkPizza 05/25/20 9:15:47 PM #14:	Sure. Ill try it! --- Official King of Kings Switch FC: 7216-4417-4511 Add Me because I'll probably add you. I'm probably the LinkPizza you'll see around. <cite>LinkPizza posted [p:939706170] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>Sure. Ill try it!</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Pus_N_Pecans 05/26/20 9:48:24 AM #15:	Looks good to me! --- My arts- https://www.deviantart.com/bleakcreep <cite>Pus_N_Pecans posted [p:939725001] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>Looks good to me! </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
AwesomeTurtwig 05/27/20 7:54:31 PM #16:	LinkPizza posted... Sure. Ill try it! I'll PM you a key on Discord. --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ <cite>AwesomeTurtwig posted [p:939803044] in Any critiq... [t:78714806]...</cite> <quote>LinkPizza posted... </cite> <quote>Sure. Ill try it!</quote>I'll PM you a key on Discord. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Poll of the Day > Any critiques of this steam store page?