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Dreaming_King
07/02/17 6:59:39 PM
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So a brief overview of the plot/first episode.

One day an ordinary, everyday otaku who is fed up with daily life falls asleep while playing a new fantasy video game. When he wakes up he finds himself in another world, lying in bed inside a castle with a beautiful young woman looking over him. She gives him a huge hug and starts crying, bringing a bunch of soldiers rushing in, who salute him and cheer when they see him sitting up. The girl, Princess Bella, asks the guy, who she refers to as Stock, how he feels. He has no idea what is going on though and faints from shock.

When he wakes up he is still in the castle rather than having woken up like he assumed he would as from a dream. A soft spoken and handsome young man who introduces himself as Yuri Lovegone, captain of the northern guard, explains that Stock, Stock Lequest (get it? Like request and "the" quest, like "regarding the quest") is the captain of the western guard and fell ill after being cursed some time ago, which has apparently impacted his memories. As Stock gets his bearings he tries to remember his life on Earth, but his memories have faded like a bad dream in the morning sun, and he can remember nothing of his life in this world. Yuri returns his sword, a legendary relic called Dragon Star for it's flame enchantment, but it elicits nothing more.

Princess Bella joins the two and gives exposition and whatever about the evil empire her kingdom is fighting against and the curious masked general who laid the curse on Stock. Also when Stock asks what exactly their relationship was she gets super embarrassed and starts stammering. She is saved by Mary Lovegone, Yuri's (very) well endowed older half sister interrupting her to starts teasing Yuri about him not showing any emotion at Stock waking up even though she knows he's relieved and happy. She is a powerful witch who helps the kingdom in times of need like now, but it too wild and free spirited to work for them directly like Yuri who is one of the best fencer in the land (although he's something of a pacifist).

The group has been walking thought the castle to the chamber of the great, ancient sage so they can examine Stock to see how to fix the memory problem. When they step inside Stock is surprised to see a little girl instead of a wise old man as he expected. The girl, Dolo, is actually a thousand+ year old artificial life form who was created by some wizard as an assistant, but out living him, vowed to find a way to gain a soul and has read every tome in the land in that quest and done many experiments with healing magic, even creating some artificial lifeforms herself.

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Dreaming_King
07/02/17 7:00:02 PM
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She has been fascinated by the curse on Stock for a while since it was one of very few ailments she couldn’t find a cure for and this memory issue with fragments of memories of another world fascinates her to the point she decides to devote herself entirely to curing him. Summoning a host of lifeforms she tells them to look after things while she's gone and then
calls a mouse like artificial lifeform called “Mr. Mic” (mascot character) to accompany them towards the first location she thinks the party should check for clues in.

The Princess chooses to accompany them and fight with her bow if need be, since Stock was cursed saving her life and she wants to repay him, or so she says. As they leave the castle gates, a shadowy figure and a giant black wolf leap down from the ramparts and the man draws his massive long sword. Even as the rest of the party draws their weapons, the figure smirks but then frowns as he sees Stock paralyzed with fear. He growls and sheaths his sword asking him who this imposter of the western captain is. Yuri calls him out as Blade Lord Cross (he has a cross shaped scar on his face), a mercenary supposedly working for the kingdom who is said to used demonic powers. He says that before Stock was cursed he agreed to a rematch from an earlier battle where Stock won him over to fight for the kingdom, and he only came to make good on the promise.

However after hearing about the memory loss he realizes there would be no point in fighting Stock now as it would be an easy win. He and his dire wolf Lupin, to the discomfort of most of the party, join them in their quest to restore the memories of Stock and defeat the evil empire, although he makes it clear he is only there to make sure Stock doesn’t die before he’s worth killing. As they walk along the road towards town it cuts to the fortress of the empire where the evil general clutches a sword very similar to the one Stock has which burns with black flames.

OK, so all I have to do is write this out in light novel format, have it translated into Japanese, have them like it enough to make a manga of it, and have that manga do well enough to get an anime, which hopefully gets a video game or two so I can get VIP status here and gloat on the boards.

What do you think?
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Go_Totodile
07/02/17 7:00:23 PM
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No, you didn't.
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Dreaming_King
07/02/17 7:05:42 PM
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Go_Totodile posted...
No, you didn't.

Wow, you sure can read quickly.

Oh wait, you didn't read it at all did you? No idea why you have a troll boner for me, but you just make yourself look silly with these posts of yours.
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EvilMegas
07/02/17 7:20:30 PM
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You know what brief means?
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SkynyrdRocker
07/02/17 7:21:07 PM
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EvilMegas posted...
You know what brief means?

Lol
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Greenfox111
07/02/17 7:24:45 PM
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yeahhhh this is amazing. you're a true genius
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Dreaming_King
07/02/17 7:27:25 PM
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EvilMegas posted...
You know what brief means?

I could have made it twice as long, easily.

Greenfox111 posted...
yeahhhh this is amazing. you're a true genius

Heh, thanks, finally someone with taste. It just came to me out of the blue today at work too, how crazy is that?
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dragon504
07/02/17 7:35:03 PM
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Go_Totodile posted...
No, you didn't.


SkynyrdRocker posted...
EvilMegas posted...
You know what brief means?

Lol

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HorrorJudasGoat
07/02/17 8:10:06 PM
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Congratulations. Tldr.
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Dreaming_King
07/03/17 9:13:20 AM
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OK, for all of my special guests, here is a tldr version.

An otaku wakes up in a video game like fantasy world as a renowned hero with a beautiful princess fawning over him (wish fulfilment), a stoic pretty boy as his best friend(fujo/shipping bait), pretty boy's lewd older sister flirting with him (fan service), a thousand year old white mage loli who enjoys running experiments on him (fan service), her adorable but wise cracking mouse (marketable mascot/comic relief), and a mercenary rival with dark powers and a giant black wolf(edge factor) who are on a quest to stop an evil empire with a mysterious general (long running secret to keep people coming back even if they hate the show, just to see how it resolves).

It has everything it needs to be the next hit.
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DDirtyDastard
07/03/17 9:21:55 AM
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Dreaming_King posted...


It has everything it needs to be the next hit.


Except for the drawings.
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DDirtyDastard
07/03/17 9:22:07 AM
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Dreaming_King posted...


It has everything it needs to be the next hit.


Drawings?
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Dreaming_King
07/03/17 9:27:03 AM
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The only thing I can draw is weapons...

Well I have the day and tomorrow off, so maybe I can make something up.
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I_Abibde
07/03/17 9:27:33 AM
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Dreaming_King posted...
It has everything it needs to be the next hit.


Go stand on the X and wait for the anvil, please.
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Reciful_II
07/03/17 9:34:10 AM
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Dreaming_King posted...
OK, for all of my special guests, here is a tldr version.

An otaku wakes up in a video game like fantasy world as a renowned hero with a beautiful princess fawning over him (wish fulfilment), a stoic pretty boy as his best friend(fujo/shipping bait), pretty boy's lewd older sister flirting with him (fan service), a thousand year old white mage loli who enjoys running experiments on him (fan service), her adorable but wise cracking mouse (marketable mascot/comic relief), and a mercenary rival with dark powers and a giant black wolf(edge factor) who are on a quest to stop an evil empire with a mysterious general (long running secret to keep people coming back even if they hate the show, just to see how it resolves).

It has everything it needs to be the next hit.


Still TLDR for me
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Dreaming_King
07/03/17 9:36:09 AM
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I_Abibde posted...
Dreaming_King posted...
It has everything it needs to be the next hit.


Go stand on the X and wait for the anvil, please.

Don't hate the player, hate the game.
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Smarkil
07/03/17 11:30:59 AM
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Dreaming_King posted...
pretty boy's lewd older sister flirting with him (fan service), a thousand year old white mage loli who enjoys running experiments on him (fan service)


How can you have fan service for something that doesn't have fans?
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Dreaming_King
07/03/17 12:18:36 PM
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Smarkil posted...
Dreaming_King posted...
pretty boy's lewd older sister flirting with him (fan service), a thousand year old white mage loli who enjoys running experiments on him (fan service)


How can you have fan service for something that doesn't have fans?

Voluptuous whores and lolies definitely have fans, ones that will sit through an otherwise mediocre show just to get their fix, trust me.
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Blighboy
07/03/17 12:41:43 PM
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Dreaming_King posted...
OK, for all of my special guests, here is a tldr version.

An otaku wakes up in a video game like fantasy world as a renowned hero with a beautiful princess fawning over him (wish fulfilment), a stoic pretty boy as his best friend(fujo/shipping bait), pretty boy's lewd older sister flirting with him (fan service), a thousand year old white mage loli who enjoys running experiments on him (fan service), her adorable but wise cracking mouse (marketable mascot/comic relief), and a mercenary rival with dark powers and a giant black wolf(edge factor) who are on a quest to stop an evil empire with a mysterious general (long running secret to keep people coming back even if they hate the show, just to see how it resolves).

It has everything it needs to be the next hit.

This has definitely already been made, because I'm pretty sure I've seen at least five different parodies or variants of it.
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EclairReturns
07/03/17 12:43:53 PM
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It sounds too much like an otaku fantasy, and I feel like it would pander too much to that demographic to warrant any other attention.
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Dreaming_King
07/03/17 1:06:24 PM
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Blighboy posted...
This has definitely already been made, because I'm pretty sure I've seen at least five different parodies or variants of it.


EclairReturns posted...
It sounds too much like an otaku fantasy, and I feel like it would pander too much to that demographic to warrant any other attention.


Who do you think buys all of the $100+ figures and blu ray OVAs? If a property is shown to be valuable it will get adapted to everything from coffee cups to video games and tweaked along the way, all for the purpose of making even more money. After it has the otaku under lock and key, debating over things like best girl, it can widen it's sights if it needs to.
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Blighboy
07/03/17 1:09:01 PM
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Dreaming_King posted...
Who do you think buys all of the $100+ figures and blu ray OVAs?

Mostly me tbh

But I buy them for series I already like, not for series that are worse versions of what already exists

It's like when some rando company makes a shitty shooter and expects it to be as popular as Battlefield and CoD. Doesn't work that way, the audience is already taken. Likewise there are a dozen anime every year trying to be the next SAO.
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usui88
07/03/17 1:12:06 PM
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Holy damn I thought this was a joke at first are you telling me you're serious with this shit
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Dreaming_King
07/03/17 1:17:11 PM
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Oh man, how could I forget the title of this great work? Since it'd be a light novel initially, something like...

"At one time I might have just been a clueless otaku... but now I'm a cluess hero in a strange land fated to save the world?!"

would work. It being an idiotic name, something like "Dragon Star" would probably be used for later adaptations.
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shadowSEXil
07/03/17 4:41:24 PM
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Is this a Balor account? It sounds like a Balor account. I haven't been around here in a while though.
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What_The_Chris
07/03/17 4:44:14 PM
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wow, I've never heard of that one before
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Dreaming_King
07/03/17 5:01:09 PM
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What_The_Chris posted...
wow, I've never heard of that one before

Which part?

shadowSEXil posted...
Is this a Balor account? It sounds like a Balor account. I haven't been around here in a while though.

Nope.
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What_The_Chris
07/04/17 2:48:18 AM
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the concept
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